The Fast Times of Lance

So just screwing around with words with a friend on facebook and they telling me to flow so i came up with this off the top of the dome. What do you guys think is this good?

yea and my flows so true, my bars go so high in the sky blue, but hit u like the ocean view they breathtaking like some good lovemaking, they knock you out like mike tyson and battle? you dont wanna fight son